After
all Muslims fast during the month of Ramadhan, Eid al-fitr come with variety of
preparation. I have done to welcome it.
On
1st Syawwal all muslims celebrate Eid al-fitr. After the Eid prayer
in the field of Gribig, I came home with my family. Then my self and my family
to eat together. After that, my self and my family went to my grandmother’s
house. There are very nice, because all the family gathered all.
Finally,
after the evening, my self and my family back home.
Name:
Chilman Syarif
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Name: Dedi Setyadi
Peer's name: Chilman Syarif
Title of the recount text: Eid al-fitr
1. Text Organization
a. Did the writer choose an appropriate title? YES
b. Does the text have complete structure? (orientation, sequences of events, reorientation) NO, THERE IS NO ORIENTATION AND REORIENTATION
c. Does Orientation state clear topic? (who, what, where, and when the event happened) NO
d. Do the events put in sequences? YES
e. Does each paragraph have elaboration (supporting sentences) in order to make the reader more understand about the writer's story? NO
SCORE: 2
2. Content
a. Does the text develop clear idea? YES
SCORE: 5
3. Grammar
a. Has the writer used past tense correctly? NO
- AFTER ALL MUSLIMS FAST ... --> AFTER ALL MUSLIMS FASTED ...
- EID AL-FITR COME ... --> EID AL-FITR CAME ...
- I HAVE DONE TO WELCOME .... --> I HAD DONE TO WELCOME ....
b. Has the writer used preposition correctly? NO
- THEN MY SELF AND MY FAMILY TO EAT TOGETHER --> THEN MY SELF AND MY FAMILY ATE TOGETHER
c. Has the writer used linking words such as then, next, later, after than, etc in order to put the event in understandable sequences? YES
SCORE: 2
4. Punctuation
a. Has the writer used correct punctuation? (capital letter, coma, full stop, and apostrophe) NO
- Eid al-fitr --> Eid Al-Fitr
b. Has the writer written their text using correct spelling? NO
- MY SELF --> MYSELF
SCORE: 0
5. Style
a. has the writer used various vocabularies? NO
- THEN MY SELF AND MY FAMILY TO EAT TOGETHER --> THEN I AND MY FAMILY ATE TOGETHER
SCORE: 0
TOTAL SCORE: 9 X 4 = 36
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