One
month before the day of Eid, I and all Muslim in the world implement Ramadhan
fasting. Ramadhan fasting is held every day from dawn until sunset. Muslims was
allowed to breakfast in the dawn in the month of ramadhan, then we had to fast,
while evening we are allowed to break our fasting.
To
welcome Eid, the night before the first day of shawwal, muslims proclaimed
takbir as a sign of greatness to God and a sign that eid coming up the next day.
Many boys do the takbir in the mosque and also by car around the city.
In
the morning we wake up in preparation for Eid prayers in the field, because the
Eid prayers held as the dhuha. But before my family pray, we breakfast with
food prepared by my mother. After breakfast, we all went to the ground play.
After it completes, we came to my family home and I apologize to each other.
After that I and my family went to my relatives’ home for sillaturahmi and
apologize.
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Novia Khoirunnisyak
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Name: Ernitania fahrin Fajrina
Peer's name: Novia khoirun nisyak
Title of the recount text: the celebrated feast of Eid Al-Fitr
1. Text Organization
a. Did the writer choose an appropriate title? NO
IT SHOULD BE THE CELEBRATION OF EID AL-FITR
b. Does the text have complete structure? (orientation, sequences of events, reorientation) NO
THERE IS NO CONCLUSION
c. Does Orientation state clear topic? (who, what, where, and when the event happened) NO, ORIENTATION TALKS ABOUT FASTING
d. Does each paragraph have elaboration (supporting sentences) in order to make the reader more understand about the writer's story? YES
SCORE: 1
2. Content
a. Does the text develop clear idea? YES
SCORE: 5
3. Grammar
a. Has the writer used past tense correctly? NO
- I AND ALL MUSLIMS IN THE WORLD IMPLEMENT .... --> I AND ALL MUSLIMS IN THE WORLD IMPLEMENTED ....
- RAMADHAN FASTING IS HELD .... --> RAMADHAN FASTING WAS HELD ....
- WHILE EVENING WE ARE ... --> WHILE EVENING WE WERE ...
b. Has the writer used preposition correctly? YES
c. Has the writer used linking words such as then, next, later, after than, etc in order to put the event in understandable sequences? YES
SCORE: 3
4. Punctuation
a. Has the writer used correct punctuation? (capital letter, coma, full stop, and apostrophe) NO
- ramadhan --> Ramadhan
- In the morning we wake up ... --> In the morning, we wake up ...
b. Has the writer written their text using correct spelling? YES
SCORE: 2,5
5. Style
a. has the writer used various vocabularies? NO
SCORE: 0
TOTAL SCORE: 11,5 X 4 = 46
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